Book Review 8 'Metal Mouth'

I read ‘Metal Mouth’ this time. A boy, Brad is not the best-looking kid in his class, he looks like bad kid, but he isn’t care about it. He thinks his life is okay. There is a girl, Emma Green who has braces on her mouth, and he feels sorry for her. One day his mother gets call from dentist and hears that he has to put on braces on his teeth, and she tells that thing to him. Then, he gets the old kind of braces the same kind as Emma Green. He isn’t happy with this and he feels sorry for there are two people have a face of metal in his class. One day when he walks home from school the lightning hit in front of him, and start weird things from next day that all of metal things sticks to his teeth for example, can of juice, fork, or magnet. One day, at school, he is drinking water from water supply and his teeth sticks again and somebody say hey to him and he turns around then it is Emma Green who has braces too. She helps him from his problem. When he is trying to say thanks, their braces stick. Then they become friend now.

I don't like this story.

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ume

My grandmother made jam from the plum yesterday and she shared this to us. It was good taste and my aunt made this plate. I don't like jam but i liked natural jam. It is first time tasting plum jam.

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der

I made cookie but it was taste like powder and koge. I will try again.　

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hair

I read　‘The Magic Barber’this time. Crossways is a quiet town. People who live in Crossways are unhappy because they are always wearing a black hat. One day a boy is walking along the street. He is beating a drum and walking in front of a donkey. The donkey is pulling a cart. Everybody wakes up. The man is sitting on the cart and the man cut hears of people. People’s head become nice. They have green, red or yellow hair now. They are happy. But next morning, their head are bald. Everybody gets angry and they need hats now.

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Report

I don't care about it, it does not know anything just going too fast. I can't write.

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Essay 5 'The worst day in my life'

The worst day in my life
There is my worst day. When I was nine years old, on my birthday, I was in school and it was summer vacation. I had a birthday party with my friends in the afternoon. I was very excited. On my way to home from school, I was riding my bicycle, and then I saw a fox run across the street. And I worried too much about it so I fall down from bicycle to in the field. This field was deep a meter from the road. First, I held up my bicycle and I went up from there. Then there was an old woman and she was watching at me. She came to me and she asked me are you okay and she helped me. Her house was near that field so she took me to the yard. I grazed my knee and elbow and my body was very dirty. She poured off the mud by hose. She was very kind to me and I was very ashamed. After that I went to home and I took shower again and again. Then I cooked dinner for my birthday party. My mother was making birthday cake. I didn’t tell what happen on return road. I felt sorry to her for my mistake. In the afternoon, my friend came to my house and we had birthday party. I had fun but, I sank whole day and also my bicycle broke down.

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