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Dear Mr.000 and Mrs.000

Hi, how are you? First of all, Thank you for reply to me. I am so glad that know about you. This is second time to go to America. I went to Texas as exchange student. It was 3 years ago. So I forgot English but I think I will remember English soon when I go to there. So, don't worry about talk with me. So you have three kids. I don't have little brother or little sister so I really looking forward to see your kids. And I also happy that I am going to have big sister in America. My sister is 21st years old so I am glad. And don't worry about have pets. I have 2 dogs and 2 cats in my house. I love animal. I sleep with my cats every night. I think you don't know about me so I am going to introduce about me. I am 19years old. I go to the university in Kumamoto. Kumamoto is my local town. I go to university by bike. I have also have driver license. I am taking English cource. I have sixteen classes. It is easy for me pass the class. I study always about two hour. I like to study English. I go to English conversation cram school once a week. There are many foreign teacher. It is fun for speak with them. I also like listening to music. So sometimes I go to the club for listening music. I like drive with my family, friends, and with my dogs. I go to somewhere far place twice a month. In Kumamoto have many hot springs, I like to go there. We have a lot of beautiful place in Kumamoto. There is the most biggest caldera in the world. I want to show you that. I am going to bring picture of it to America. I have a triathlon team. When I was elementary school student, I met a teacher who is triathlon player. And then I started triathlin with her team. I like to play sport so much. So I want to join some sport club in American school.
By the way, I have friend who lives in Wisconsin America. She lives near your place, so if I can meet her I want to go her place and I want to introduce her. She is good person. Then, I want to make more friends over there. And I want to good English speaker. I am going to do my best in America.
I am really looking forward to see you this summer!! Take care always. Bye.

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